Here’s another six from FORESHADOW, book one of The Shadow Imperium! How would you like to have Rae’s crazy nightmares?
The fog thickened around me and began to coalesce. I could hear laughter echoing from within the fog. It was horrifying. I couldn’t get past whatever was forming behind me. I threw my hands over my head in a futile attempt to protect myself and crouched down, sobbing hysterically. I was expecting the worst, but praying for a miracle . . .
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This is a great six. I love the last line, and don't we all…Expect the worst and pray for a miracle?
Good description of a gloomy scene. Creepy and scary.
Uh-oh, that can't be good. Great six! 🙂
Run away! Sounds terrifying, poor thing.
Pray for a miracle. Love the fog transforming into something, well sort of, real
Awesome emotionally packed six.
creepy, but the re-use of 'fog' twice in two sentences really jumped out at me.
Thanks for pointing that out, 1000th.monkey! I didn't notice that before.Thanks for all the other comments everyone!
I can feel her terror! Well written!