I’m returning to “Foreshadow” this week for another six!
A dark fog eddied and swirled around his body. Lightning crackled at his hands. He raised his arms and flung them forward.
I cringed as the lightning surged toward us. I couldn’t move fast enough to get out of the way. I shut my eyes tightly, waiting for the shock.
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Wow, so many questions erupt from your choice six this week. Awesome
Great and intriguing description. Wonder what's going on. 🙂
Wow, quite scary, waiting to be struck by lightning?
Oooh, love it! I want to know more! *grin*~XakaraA Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
Oh – amazing descriptions and anticipation!
It takes a bit of work to make an action sequence feel fast, and this one does it. Time slows toward the end of it, but that seems appropriate to 'waiting for the shock.'
It's not looking good and you will continue with this
That is not a good place to be. Hope it comes out all right.
The prose is definitely working with the pace on this. Thanks for sharing!
That was great. IS he a God?
Thanks, everyone! Jayel, I guess you'll just have to read it and see!murdersandmysteries, you want me to pick up from here next week with another six? I may just do that . . .