Six Sentence Sunday

Here’s another six sentences from “Ouroboros”, book one of The Zayin Chronicles!

“Well, I never wanted to get involved in—in—whatever this is!” I jumped up and headed for the door. There was a large, muscled man blocking my way, his back turned to me. I reached out to tap his shoulder to ask him to move . . . and my hand passed through him. I froze and turned toward Zac, wide eyed. “Am I dead?” I whispered, my voice trembling.

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10 Comments

Oh my! That is a shocker. I just sooooo want to know more. Great six

posted 07/31/2011 at 2:23 PM by Sherry Gloag Reply
Wow. Great 6

posted 07/31/2011 at 5:23 PM by Jayel Kaye Reply
Holy crap. I'm surprised she can talk at all. What a shock.

posted 07/31/2011 at 6:08 PM by Suzie Quint Reply
Whoa! Good job.

posted 07/31/2011 at 6:44 PM by Ursula Whistler Reply
Yeah, holy crap is right.

posted 07/31/2011 at 9:37 PM by murdersandmysteries Reply
Yep, I'd say that's a clue she's dead. Enjoyed your six.

posted 08/01/2011 at 3:09 AM by Cara Bristol Reply
Oh, wow! I need to read more!!!

posted 08/01/2011 at 3:10 AM by Michele Barrow-Belisle Reply
What a great last line! Must have been a shocker for sure.

posted 08/01/2011 at 3:19 AM by Sandy Ruth Reply
Oh, this is intriguing! I'm wondering if she'd dead, too, or if the man is a ghost. Great snippet!

posted 08/02/2011 at 2:22 PM by gayleramage Reply
I hadn't seen that coming! I love it! Can't wait for more

posted 08/03/2011 at 12:43 AM by Carrie Ann Ryan Reply

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